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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-10-17 10:01 PM



Chime Of Every Twenty-four

Just weeks from shirtsleeve sunshine, humid afternoons as wine
A mixture of sandcastles and harsh blown rainy days
The sky weeps, and I think of time as a white washed mime
Cloudy gives way to clear, each leaf a general brigadier
Color reaches peak, and falls to silence

Where would I be, if there is an anywhere?
In love with you

Copyright Kkh 10/17/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-10-17 10:03 PM



Ok.  I give up.

Kathleen?  I now have a new
favorite of yours.



And Libraried!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-17 11:36 PM



agree with Sunshine
this is a new favorite
and those last two lines?
ahhh
those last two lines...

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-17 11:36 PM



agree with Sunshine
this is a new favorite
and those last two lines?
ahhh
those last two lines...

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-10-17 11:49 PM


Well, TD, I'm "in love with" your poetry!!!

This poem was especially loverly!!!


EA

Strathaniel
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5 posted 2006-10-18 03:16 AM


"I think of time as a white washed mine"  I like that.
Magnus
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6 posted 2006-10-18 05:24 PM


Pantomime,  grocerymime....meeniemime....
Sheesh, can I ever get it right....

Yes K. the seasons are changing, aren't
they...and love just goes on down that
track...through the tunnel and onward to
a lake shore...cost....Nada, a freebie....

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