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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-17 07:30 PM



This Is For Yess..that woman i called some days ago...just to hear her voice, just to hear her laugh..

Here we go,

When I Phoned Just to Hear your Voice

Hello, My Love, Hello
I'm glad you answered the phone
i only called to hear your voice

i know we've been fighting
for things i don't remember
but i still love you
like the first day
i know it's late
but i couldn't wait
to hear you

hello, my love, hello
i don't have much to say
i only called to hear your voice

i know i was cold
when you wanted me to be warmer
i know i have my mistakes
mistakes you can't forgive
i know it's late
but i couldn't wait to tell you
forgive me

that's all, my love, that's all
i'm glad you answered the phone
now i can go to sleep again
'cause now my heart
feels the peace you've given me
and i know it's lait
but i couldn't wait to tell you
I love you

good night my love
i hope we meet someday
and i hope you'll forgive me
for all those things
that i did wrong
goodnight.

© Copyright 2006 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-10-17 07:38 PM


Enjoyed...I hope next time you call you can talk about the things you did wrong and... some things you did right...James
DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2006-10-17 08:22 PM


Thanks for replying and i apologize for a mistake i had...on the sentence 'I Know it's LAIT' i don't know why did i put Lait..some new word i've invented!! heh..
in any case, i apologize and, what it goes is 'LATE' as i'm sure you already guessed.

Denis.

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-10-17 08:57 PM


grinning, understanding this
thanks for sharing your thoughts

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