I enjoyed this quite a bit. Reminded me of Tolkien and Tennyson and Arthurian cycle stuff, without Arthur of course. I enjoyed particularly the competence of the way the rhyme and the meter was handled, and the way you kept the story moving through the poem without getting bogged down. I think it's very good mythological type verse. Thanks for writing it and for letting it be enjoyed. BobK.
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