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Open Poetry #39

Troubled Life

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

0 posted 2006-10-17 10:15 AM

The sunshine grows cloudy and dim
no hope for this unsatisfying life
when you spend each night in tears
and you just keep looking at that knife.
A troubled and mixed-up youth
who creates ordeals to always feel pain
who can't let herself be loved
who feels as if she's going insane.
The situations just get worse
and the need to run grows more and more
to feel like no one loves her
that her entire life has been a bore.
Please show her how to be affectionate
tell her it's all right to smile
show her that you will love her
every second, every hour, every mile.
Maybe one day she will see
the beauty she holds inside
that the future holds wonderous things
and that there is no longer a need to hide.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

1 posted 2006-10-17 11:10 AM

(Brought tears to my eyes)

I can relate to this.
You did a wonderful job expressing yourself!
There was a lot of feeling here.

Thankyou for sharing

~Kira

Becky Mangrum
Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 56

2 posted 2006-11-02 06:25 PM

Very touching. Thanks for sharing this with me.
Becky

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-11-02 09:28 PM

touching, yes

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-11-02 10:27 PM

Very nice indeed.
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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