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Fate Took My Baby Away......

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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 10-17-2006 02:30 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine


Fate has taken its toll once more
To leave us lifeless shocked deeply to the core.
A baby perched upon an angels guiding wing.
Is carried home, to godís sweet hymn

We seek revenge for the pain now caused
For more hurt on a family leaves life slowly paused.
How can we learn to forgive?
When we hurt so much we canít bear to live.

I have a life to slowly get back too
I have people to see and lots to do
If I canít grieve, I canít carry on
And If I donít carry on well then the devil has won.

I pick myself up from this solid ground
I hold my head high and I stand proud
I will carry on for the one I have lost
Because she deserves to see me smile, no matter what the cost

To the angels high in heaven, Look after my baby girl
Keep her safe and secure, teach her how to twirl
If she twirls like a ballerina then I know you have succeeded
Youíve made my girl become exactly what I needed.

[This message has been edited by RevengeIsMine (10-17-2006 06:02 AM).]

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PoetrySinger
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1 posted 10-17-2006 10:08 AM       View Profile for PoetrySinger   Email PoetrySinger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetrySinger

we have to do a poetry portfolio of 25 poems and pictures to go with them 5 of are own and well yours is so good I'm going to use it in mine with the credit of yur name of cousre for this amazing poem if thats ok

Kira Aso
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2 posted 10-17-2006 11:15 AM       View Profile for Kira Aso   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kira Aso


This was so sad! Too much emotional turmoil for me. Honestly I find this to be a very deep and powerful poem. It truly moved me.

~Kira
RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 10-18-2006 02:13 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Kira, Thankyou so very much for ur kind words, its always lovley to recieve a reply from you especcialy when they are positive.

Poetry Singer, i was not aware of this so thanks. You are welcome to use my poem. Thankyou for ur kind words.

Hugs and Kisses,
Jessica
Strathaniel
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4 posted 10-18-2006 03:22 AM       View Profile for Strathaniel   Email Strathaniel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Strathaniel

That is a very good poem.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 10-22-2006 08:32 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Your baby girl is twirling like a ballerina among the other angels. She knows you love her and that one day you will be reunited.

An exceptionally moving read. My own sister lost her baby girl whom she had named after me. I can understand some of the pain than you must have felt losing your own daughter.

God bless both of you!

Giving you a loving, comforting, and compassionate hug,

EA
Rocheal
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6 posted 03-15-2009 10:37 PM       View Profile for Rocheal   Email Rocheal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rocheal

What happened???? Oh my God that was hard to read. I am so sorry you've had so much heart ache. You write wonderful poems, by the way. I am totally a fan.
 
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