This Chemical Version of Love

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Open Poetry #39

This Chemical Version of Love

Strathaniel
Junior Member

since 2006-10-17

Posts 12

0 posted 2006-10-17 01:59 AM

This Chemical Version of Love
Just is not you.
You say you want me to be happy.
But you can't be the one that makes me so.
But you are the one.
You made me smile.
You made me laugh.
You made me love.
You pulled me from the depth of a mindless Hell.
A lonely place.
I'm falling again.
To that place.
The more I struggle, the more I sink.
Until this darkness surrounds me, takes me whole, and washes away your brilliant light.
I am so far away now.
Your light like a star I could gaze at.
In wonder.
I want it over.
I can't be here, alone.
I want you back.
I want your love.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-10-17 07:40 AM

Strathaniel~
Welcome to the circle of poetic friendships~

Looks like you write straight from the heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-10-17 08:54 AM

Straight from the heart.

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

3 posted 2006-10-17 09:40 AM

Hey, thats cool I really like it and all keep up the good work

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2006-10-18 01:48 PM

i know this feeling and i hated when they told me that i hated it so i know how you feel between that and them telling me im sick and they can't deal ugh you captured my emotions of my last real love... thanxs

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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