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Open Poetry #39

Fate Unexpected (Haiku)

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-10-16 03:32 PM

from a clear blue sky,
unconcerned with etiquette,
strikes a thunderbolt

CG

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2006-10-16 04:49 PM

as is THIS.

I was telling a friend I'm rather um, "picky" about the haiku. (Weird, considering I can't write one m'self)

But I love this one.

More than nice. A haiku with impact.

POW!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-10-16 08:50 PM

Has love written all over it!
Nice.

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

3 posted 2006-10-16 09:01 PM

I loved this, I am a fan of the haiku.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2006-10-16 10:25 PM

Nicely done. This one smacks of Zeus.
Regards,
INclan

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-10-17 12:10 PM

yes
I love a rude thounderbolt
CG

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

6 posted 2006-10-17 04:57 AM

Loved this write, CastleGuard.
I was startled by the volume of this thunderbolt.

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2006-10-17 11:24 AM

Thank you. It came to me...in a similar manner.

CG

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