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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-10-15 11:02 PM

Looking out across Sunday, leaving,
I see her bow after her dance,
another Monday soon will be here
and I guess we lost our chance.

Looking out across Sunday, leaving,
a hazy shade of a sigh alights
upon my heart and I think of you
and our beautiful together-nights.

Looking out across Sunday, leaving,
I realize I'm not ready yet
to give myself to you once more
until I'm sure I won't regret.

I smile, knowing all the secrets
my breath will someday tell
of what you mean to me, but now,
for now, Sunday bids farewell.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

1 posted 2006-10-16 12:06 PM

a gentle
hopeful poem Dixie
and the title is outstanding...

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2006-10-16 01:16 AM

I liked this one.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-10-16 03:49 AM

Dixie, that was absolutely lovely.

Linda

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2006-10-16 04:43 AM

Everything about this poem is lovely. I fell into it.

aziza

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-10-16 08:49 AM

Dixie, the title alone could be a poem!
I love this, and the photo is perfect.
Hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

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My own little Icey Oblivion

6 posted 2006-10-16 05:26 PM

yes the photo fits the poem very well and the poem was wonderful itself

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2006-10-16 06:05 PM

Beautifully expressed poem Dixie..love that title, too!

M

passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-10-16 09:45 PM

thanks all

glad you enjoyed this late Sunday write

sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29

Posts 125

9 posted 2006-10-24 12:10 PM

"I smile, Knowing all the secrets

my breath will someday tell"

W O W !!1

I Love It.....

passing shadows
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10 posted 2006-10-24 07:32 AM

sweetberry

glad you are here again

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2006-10-24 08:32 AM

Expressed very well, Dixie. Take all the time you need.

seraphin
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Michigan

12 posted 2006-10-24 08:37 AM

Just lovely, Dixie. Completely.

Sandra

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