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jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
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Ut, USA

0 posted 2006-10-15 09:05 PM



How can my heart change so fast?
My love for him is now in the past
Now when I look at you
Everything seems too good to be true

I’ve never wanted anything more
I’ve never needed anyone to live for
I’ve been myself whenever I’m with you
I feel like I’m stuck to glue

Now that I have someone to impress
I go out and buy a new dress
I try something new with my hair
For me that’s only to rare


You’ve changed me for the good
Now I do everything I should
I love this new feeling inside
When was the last time I cried?


This is my question for you
Do you feel the same way about me?
Don’t tell me what is not true
Otherwise I can not be set free

Is this love or infatuation?
Please send me a salutation
By Patricia Jarrett

© Copyright 2006 Patricia Kay Jarrett - All Rights Reserved
Sarkany
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since 2006-10-14
Posts 32

1 posted 2006-10-15 10:33 PM


Hi

I was a bit confused when I first read this poem. I got it now, this poem is a letter to someone you like. You are reassuring the new guy by saying that the old guy you used to be with means nothing to you anymore because he was dull and uncaring but that your new love interest is exciting and makes you behave like a women.  
What will the new guy think about all this I wonder.

Sarkany
      

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2006-10-15 11:19 PM


yep...I know this feeling too

you expressed it well

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