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artexeres
Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156
south africa

0 posted 2006-10-14 11:09 PM



Judgment
can cloud even the sternest of minds
it,
can behold the mind
and
Unfolds a tale
that has no meaning…

Judgment
Doesn’t lie in our hands,
for if it did
we wouldn’t be fair…

We
Scrutinize too much,
In fact I think
we just
don’t care!
If we took a second…

and realized,
the meaning of life.

Our understanding would become so clear,
Our perceptions
Wouldn’t look at the world  
with a disrespect
a disregard,
an opinion that filters through the air,
and looses its way.

Yet...

Comes back to you again,  
Did it have meaning?
Or
was it just there?

We look at the world,
with our eyes shut tight…
Don’t
be fooled….
No one
is watching?

For your heart and soul
bare it all …..

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Sarkany
Junior Member
since 2006-10-14
Posts 32

1 posted 2006-10-15 01:27 AM


Hi

"Do not judge lest you be judged"

The stone you throw today
May come your way
Another day

Sarkany

Good poem, with a clearly articulated point.

  


The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-15 05:00 PM



"We look at the world,
with our eyes shut tight…

exactly artexeres!

very much enjoyed...


jarrett
Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72
Ut, USA
3 posted 2006-10-15 09:46 PM


I loved it.. It had so much meaning on oh it is so true. Thank you
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