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Open Poetry #39

the eyes of love

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

0 posted 2006-10-14 09:08 PM

Have you ever looked into the eyes of love?
They entice they evolve
They bring up
those feelings that only you and me
have ever shared
They lay so dormant
soft touches like brush strokes against my soul
as your breath
becomes words then in silence
I slip
into this noise of love
Love embraces
with open arms it doesn’t hold back
As it caresses
like a soft summer breeze with
the alluring fragrance of the first taste of love.

Sarkany
Junior Member

since 2006-10-14

Posts 32

1 posted 2006-10-15 12:53 PM

Hi

Have you ever looked into the eyes of love?
They entice, they evolve
They bring up feelings,
that only you and I have shared

They lay dormant; soft touches
like brush strokes against my soul
as your breath becomes words.
Then, in silence,
I slip into this noise of love

Love embraces with open arms.
It doesn’t hold back as it caresses
like a soft summer breeze with
the alluring fragrance of the first taste of love.

Very nice poem. I made some structural suggestions.

Sarkany

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-10-15 08:58 AM

Garth~
This is soft and lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-10-15 05:16 PM

ahhh that first taste of love
this is lovely garth...

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