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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2006-10-14 04:33 PM


A dandelion drifts and blows away
in weightlessness and silver gray,
Feather weights, those floating spores
come back to life and beg for more.

Tis the path a foot has trod
and hand that cast lone seed abroad
in faith that sun, the earth, and rain
will bring forth a fruitful gain.

Beyond horizons of one's view
lies the yield of harvests due
still cocooned within Love's keep,
conceived in thought sown earthly deep.

Womb mysterious, chrysalis springs
dreams of nectar and butterfly wings
unfold on blossoms beneath blue skies ~
the promise of apples and lovers eyes.

~ Klassy Lassy



[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (10-15-2006 12:27 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-10-14 04:52 PM


Klassy,
"Womb mysterious, chrysallis springs
dreams of nectar and butterfly wings
unfold on blossoms beneath blue skies ~
the promise of apples and lovers' eyes."

I am touched.

Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2006-10-14 05:05 PM


Then its mutual... thank you, Dear Heart!  

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (10-14-2006 06:36 PM).]

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-10-14 05:06 PM


Ah Karen, how sweet of you to post this lovely for our dear Sy!
It's good to read you again.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-10-14 06:49 PM


what a gift!

thanks for sharing!

Martie
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5 posted 2006-10-14 07:25 PM


KL

A dandelion drifts and blows away
in weightlessness and silver gray,
Feather weights, those floating spores
come back to life and beg for more.


I'm partial to dandelions, and Sy.  Lovely poem!  

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-14 08:51 PM




so lovely KL
and so perfect
for Sir Sy...

miscellanea
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7 posted 2006-10-14 09:25 PM


Klassy,

   Your poem has such a gentle, silken flow.  I can well imagine the dandelion seeds drifting, alongside of the appleseed drifter.  

   Local legend passed down by my grandmother said that someone gave him a few English pear seeds.  Supposedly, he planted one on my mother's farm.  The poor old tree has withstood several lightening attacks, and yearly, it appears to be on its last leg.  Yet, it still produces the best pears...

   Sure did enjoy your picture perfect poem, Klassy!
I'm sure Sy will love it.  

miscellanea

Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-10-15 11:59 AM


Enchantress,

Thank you.  
~~~~~~~~~
Passing Shadows

Thank you for reading.  It's nice to have something to share!  
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Martie,

I like Dandelions, too, and they seem to have a hayday in my back yard every summer.  My neighbors would probably be very happy if they were gone.  One comes down and picks the most tender ones, however, to eat.  I've not seen a single one in his yard, tho.    And Sy is delightful!  

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2006-10-15 12:32 PM


The Lady

"The Lady and Sir Sy"

What complimentary names!  I am glad you share my sentiments....you leave me smling.  

~~~~~~~~~~~

Thank you, miscellanea

Awwww!...I love your story.  There is something majestic about trees, and they add so much to our lives.  That poor old pear tree--what a shame--I am warmed by its tenacity.  We have a 30' holly tree in our yard, the only one left in the court.  A devil storm hit in 2002.  I thought it was going to snap like a twig!  People come seeking its greenery and berries for Christmas but in the summer, a climbing yellow rose crowns it with blossoms.  My husband's grandma gave me the rose, and she's gone now.
  
Thank you for sharing with us, too!  

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