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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2006-10-13 01:19 PM


Today it fianlly hit me
It had been right under my nose this whole time
Hiding...playing tricks....taunting me
All along whole you sat and watched my internal torement
Taking some kind of sick pleasure in my pain
Knowing the whole time that you were the answer to my ever nagging question
Who do I belong with?
I can't believe you couldn't just tell me
Had to wait till it hit me like a ton of bricks
What the hell is wrong with you?
All this time...we could have been together...and I...I could have been happy!
But no, you sat and watched as I squirmed uncomfortably
All this time...
Longing to find my someone, when that someone is someone that I've already found...
Beacause that someone is you


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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2006-10-13 04:33 PM


Wow! I like the way you wrote this! (Green with envy)

It really is kind of funny how we find what we've been searching for is right under our noses!
They say if you look for love you won't find it and if you don't look for love it come's walking through you're door.

Loved this lots!

~Kira

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