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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-10-13 10:38 AM


This freaky Friday feels funky
for a superstitious thirteenth
but no black cats have yet
bothered me in this boo of season
sliding by into an early fall
falling with temperatures timely
in turn of leaves
leafing through seasons

suddenly shattering silence
with the eerie crunch and crackle
of footsteps faintly falling
filling the air with abstracted
aberrations abiding in absolute
awfully algid thoughts
taking their toll in
this time of transience.


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-10-13 11:04 AM


Gentle Spirit
Happens every year, enjoyed.

The Lady
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-13 11:12 PM



absolutely awesome alliterations
Donna
fun poem
I didn't realize it's
Friday the 13th!


WindWalker
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3 posted 2006-10-17 01:57 AM


This was a fun poem!!!!!!!
playing.with.crayons
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Neverland
4 posted 2006-10-17 04:52 AM


I like
black cats.

Walking under ladders frightens me a little.

Lovely write.

xx Cheye

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5 posted 2006-10-22 09:29 PM




(giggles) My Friday the 13th actually ended up being one of my better days recently; I got to anchor the KBOO Evening News, I saw an exciting movie with my family, and it was a warm sunny day, yay! (smiles) But yeah, I still am weary about ever tearing up chain letters and admit to consorting with a witch doctor twice a week, LOL, this was a cute, fun poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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