Scrawl Upon The Snow - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-10-12 10:10 PM

Scrawl Upon Then Snow

The wind sings a lullaby of white
From the porch, candles beckon the night
A moment seems blessed in its song
Leaned in visions drifting deep for so long

There we danced in the lingered return
Guiding hand at the waist, love will learn
In the warmth of your eyes my desire
Turning chill to a fevered night’s fire

There the earth rose to mold magically
Every grace sapphire lace valiantly
As the snow, came your kisses alight
When the wind sings a lullaby of white

Copyright Kkh 10/12/06

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-10-12 10:13 PM

"There the earth rose to mold magically
Every grace sapphire lace valiantly
As the snow, came your kisses alight
When the wind sings a lullaby of white"

A most lovely write Kathleen..
even though the snow arrived earlier than usual this year.
~Warm autumnal hugs, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-10-12 11:05 PM

ooooooooooooooo

beautiful!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-10-12 11:47 PM

"The wind sings a lullaby of white"

there are just some lines
that amaze me
and draw me back time
and again

this is a lovely poem TD...

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

4 posted 2006-10-12 11:52 PM

A very soothing and beautiful write. Love the rhyme and flow in this. Lovely work. Take care and Have fun. Steve

JLHunter
Senior Member

since 2006-10-08

Posts 557
CA United States

5 posted 2006-10-13 08:45 AM

Hi, TD.

I agree with Steve.

"As the snow, came your kisses alight
When the wind sings a lullaby of white"

...is a captivating couplet. Very lovely, indeed.

John xo

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2006-10-13 10:37 AM

Softly sensual...and yes, the final couplet is a great finale.

CG

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2006-10-13 10:51 AM

This is beyond lovely....beautiful writing!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.