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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-10-12 06:35 PM





dawn in the desert
for Sunshine

Praised be You my Lord with all Your creatures,
especially Sir Brother Sun

       ~from The Canticle of Brother Sun
            Saint Francis of Assisi


gunmetal ceiling
parts in measured pace
gold seeps  
onto red earthwork
in warm embrace

crag
red rocks
accept grace

valley floor sanctified
with pure light
breathes morning

his little brethren birds
soar on dawn wings
playing tag with motes

cactus stretches
lays shadow of saint francis
naked on the ground

with faith
desert soul
surrenders
to this day

_______________

In the early evening of October 3, 1226, death came for Saint Francis. He had asked to be laid naked on the ground "for as long as it takes to walk a mile unhurriedly," so that he could meet his Creator as he had entered the world…with nothing. As if to announce his entry into eternal life, a flock of sky larks flew over his still warm body.


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-10-12 06:51 PM


Oh this is soooo lovely Kate, soft and beautiful.  I so enjoy your talent lady...

never stop writing and sharing with us...

ever.....

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-12 06:55 PM




thank you
Gentle Donna

you make me smile...

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-10-12 07:44 PM


Auspicious....

as I fall into the dwell of those who left
in my Novembers;

how I am to face February without my brother;

how beautiful, how ...

you.

I know I have email.

But I wanted to thank you for this...
classic...

here.



Thank you, Poet.


Martie
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4 posted 2006-10-12 08:09 PM


Lady....Sunshine is one of my favorites things...both the person and the shine.  This poem was very warming.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-10-12 09:57 PM


amazing!
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-12 11:16 PM



I stand in awe Karilea

you know this poem was a gift to me  
all of a piece  
this morning  
it asked to be written
I was so unsure  
now I see why it’s your poem…

thank you for your inspiration

Kate

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-10-12 11:21 PM



dear Martie  
my favorite thing also
thank you
for your sweet reply…

thank you
so much Dixie…
I appreciate you

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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8 posted 2006-10-15 08:01 AM


ladyone..I was at a nude beach once and some seagulls stopped to mark me with their wisdom...(grin) enjoyed this ms
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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9 posted 2006-10-15 11:50 AM


well Stranger
it would seem all sorts of birds
have an affinity for you
long to mark you.. smile

thank you kindly


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