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Open Poetry #39

Lost in her Eyes

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-10-12 11:05 AM

I’ve had dreams of eyes such as this
Secrets the mind would keep from the soul
Reminds me of all the things I miss
Things not only need, but make me whole

Do not wake me if this is only a dream
Would love to revel in her wild abandon
Within these eyes, bottomless they seem
Would love to get lost within them

Trying to shake the vision from my head
As I see eyes that want to save me
Waking one who was here left for dead
And hope that they will not break me

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-10-12 11:09 AM

Very nicely penned and much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-10-12 01:20 PM

Pretty sigh-eyes here, poet.

Enjoyed!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2006-10-12 04:59 PM

I like this very much... great write! *S*

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-10-12 05:45 PM

Its amazing what your heart sees sometimes huh? Perhaps we each write our own love stories...somehow knowing the characters that will hold the lead role.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-10-13 11:29 PM

oh Refugee
those
"Secrets the mind would keep from the soul"
are lovely
like this poem...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-10-14 12:17 PM

wonderful!!

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