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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-10-12 08:14 AM



Today creeps in steadily
with no certain rush,
simmering in slow steam vapors
shaking sudden chill off
with shrug and yawn.

Liquid smooth, in sips
awakening senses
but the mind screams
to stay in sleep
a few moments more
spent lingering alone
in dreams
please....

until sun seeps
through the curtains
of my mind
telling me
have that second cup
of Joe,
you'll then be good to go
to see what the day holds
in store

but first, another small sip

oh just one more....

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-10-12 08:29 AM


ms gs, seems like a good way to start the day..
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-10-12 08:41 AM


A delight for the mind's eye.
Think I'll join you in the second cup

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-10-12 11:13 AM


Lovely Donna...enjoyed this one...oh my yes!
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Martie
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4 posted 2006-10-12 12:13 PM


Donna...I think Joe brightens many mornings for many.
Sunshine
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5 posted 2006-10-12 01:26 PM



Reminds me of an old, old poem I wrote...
with a little help from jo-jo.






The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-12 05:56 PM




oh yes
some dreams beg us to linger
and sip
Donna
indulge them...
and then the cup of Joe...

perfect

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-10-13 07:40 AM


Sippin on a cup of Joe now, and smiling as I read your replies.  Thanks to all so much for the kindness of your replies.  Lady, yes.....just a few moments longer to dream is needed to start a perfect day.  Hugs and peace to all.  
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8 posted 2006-10-22 09:47 PM




(giggles) I think the hummingbirds told you this morning that you might consider yerba mate as an alternative, as that will really give you all the liquid nutrients you need to skip all the way through the day, yay! (giggles) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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