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Open Poetry #39

From One World to Another

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-12 12:11 PM

Have you ever 'Jumped' from one dream to another?
for example..in the middle of a nightmare, you focused your mind on something nice and then suddenly everything changed, and that nightmare now was a pleasant dream.
well my poem is exactly about those 'Dream Jumps'.

From One World to Another

Dreaming and Dreaming
going from one world to another
jumping dream by dream
i saw you

i stopped in that dream
in that world
everything was beautifull
blue lake, our lake
that big old tree
everything was as detailed as in the real world
i stayed and watched you dancing
like i used to do
in the real world

as i watched
i couldn't stop wondering
if i'd ever see you again
in the real world
where we don't have to dream
just to see each other

i wondered
if when i woke up
i could find you
next to me

i wondered
if when i woke up
i could stand up and find you
as easy as in my dreams
just jumping
from one world to another

JLHunter
Senior Member

since 2006-10-08

Posts 557
CA United States

1 posted 2006-10-12 12:49 PM

Hi, DreamerSpirit.

That's a very "dreamy" write! Seriously, it was a vivid, imagery-laden piece that took me back to some of my own dreams. I, too, like to write about dreams as a topic. In fact, quite a few of my works are about, or include, dreams.

Well done.

John

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-12 09:54 AM

This was beautiful!

as i watched
i couldn't stop wondering
if i'd ever see you again
in the real world
where we don't have to dream
just to see each other

I have also had such dreams and I love the way you put yours into words. Dream's seem at times more pleasent then the real world, but only at times.

Lovley job!

~Kira

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-12 01:25 PM

Thanks!
i'm glad you liked it. i always write about dreams or something related to them.
thanks for reading
and for replying so warmly.
see you!

denis

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