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cobalt blues |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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she sits a cobalt mood blues beckoning beyond pale thoughts of ~once upon a time~ listen to the beat blues waterfalling as brooks babble yesterday's news when all your ears want to hear is tomorrow's price, the dues how to pay it forward, move ahead "cleanup aisle two please" then step around whatever else fell in the pathway unexpectedly today slides away while night time hovers, as if a lover awaits in the wings so you spread your winged thoughts soar, try not to look back he is there, he is there a bare two steps away but oh, they are such long steps |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sighhhh......feeling this one Kacy. oh the thoughts of once upon a time can be so melancholy.. Enjoyed your art here lady, tis beautiful.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, ~sis D~ yesterday is dead and gone,and tomorrow...well, while not out of sight, just seems so damned far away. Poetry 'helps me make it through the night' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Kacy, I liked all the visuals and sensorial suggestions. I feel I have known the character in your poem! Wish I could read and respond as much as I'd like... Take care. miscellanea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Cathy. Yes, I believe you have known. |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
This is beautiful I am the two-toed wanderer |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
let me add my *sigh* here |
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