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Refugee
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since 2006-08-04
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0 posted 2006-10-11 03:10 PM


Floating through your atmosphere
Drifting closer to you now
The slow passage of time
The miles that feel like years
Lost in the darkness
Of the before and behind
And melting like a wax candle
Here in the void between
Where there is no sound
Only us burning bright
You, pulling me in
Closer as I descend
To your gravity,
I give in


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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2006-10-11 03:33 PM


Friend Ref...this is kewl..enjoyed the view
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-10-11 04:31 PM


ohhh I like this, and that ending?  Perfect!!!     Much enjoyed.
Refugee
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 97

3 posted 2006-10-11 04:39 PM


Thank you, much appreciated.
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2006-10-11 05:08 PM


Wow!
Jupiter's magical kiss...
Wow!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2006-10-11 11:48 PM


outstanding!
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