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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2006-10-11 02:54 PM


a cambrian wonderland
hal'loween stage
horror act relived
a punished tale enacted
performer sets a beat
then two or more
find a groove
of tools that clink
think of halogen black
A wonderland of costume
that dinosaurs live on
in bone and sinews

but the new act
yearns to thrive
mismatched harmonics
become a blend for
mohawk hip crowd pleasers
thinking cambrian period
is dead and gone
alice has had her tea party
and wonderlands are nothing new...

Lizard blood heats up
mammals warm their mikes
both acts thrive
the tried and tested
horror tale of dinosaurs
recorded noise mix called music
follows alice to her table
to mismatched invited guests
topsy-turvy harmonics
or sweet sounding blends
that never end
it all depends.



© Copyright 2006 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-10-13 01:03 PM


Such a way of viewing the fossils of our society, and of our history.
Enjoyed this Martin.
TD

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2006-10-19 02:06 AM


thought of Alice Cooper inflential as before and still going strong..his act rock horror lives on...

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-19-2006 12:24 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-10-19 06:34 AM


smiling at your reply to TD and feeling kind of dinosaur-like myself

M

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
4 posted 2006-10-19 10:21 AM


Excellent read Martin.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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