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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-10-11 07:08 AM


caddy car was a sponge of the sun
bad daddy's black paint water
kept the faces of the children
when they looked inside the sin

it made ghosts sounds on the curve
made the lady skin have goosechills
and snuggle up to the comfy side
even lean on ol' nasty with fragile

but the downtown was her high dollar
long legged haughty in her heels
when the step down came to windows
and the granite man opened the door

caddy car made sinderalla golden
made her an only child in her dreams
took her to heaven's proper pentroom
brought her back from hellbound's lounge

and carried her alone to the sea of trees

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daark

scribblenote: the granite man drove her around for years in an 81 EL'd, paint so smooth you could walk into it's darkness, she was carried to the trees in an 81 El'd also, paint so smooth you could walk into it's darkness...local legend kinda...


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-11-2006 09:43 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-10-11 07:52 AM


Outstanding babe....you just keep getting finer with time.  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-10-11 01:11 PM



A little legend...
a little magic...

a great lovely.


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-10-11 01:59 PM


ms gs, thanks for the touch ms

___________

ms sun, thanks lady friend for looking in

Martie
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4 posted 2006-10-11 02:22 PM


DS

You may be a local legend yourself.

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-10-11 03:34 PM


ms martie..you mean loco yes?  thanks lil neighbor.
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6 posted 2006-10-11 05:32 PM


a smooth ride, all the way to the tree line

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-10-11 05:40 PM


ms midnite..thanks to you for the tour
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8 posted 2006-10-12 03:13 AM


woooah.....
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-10-12 06:42 AM


ms K' Thanks for the sound..
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10 posted 2006-10-12 05:00 PM




"and carried her alone to the sea of trees"

feels a sad and lonely legend
Stranger...


Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-10-12 06:25 PM


ladyone..she said it was time, many times before the last ride.  The El'd still wears her perfume.  Thanks babe
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