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JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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0 posted 2006-10-11 01:33 AM

Haiku Wind Series

Desert

Suffer the Little Flowers

White sand drifts as snow.
The flower cries for water--
Wind muffles the cries.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Plains

I of the Needle

Wind whistles through pines.
The white pines sigh mournful sounds.
Needles fall to Earth.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Beaches

Water Paints

Waves lap at the shore.
Whitecaps are driven by wind.
Sea foam paints the sand.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mountains

Mountain Spring

Mountain peaks are bare.
Snow melts with wind-driven warmth.
Spring feeds the dry streams.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-10-11 12:45 PM

These haikus are very lovely!

Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-10-11 01:19 PM

B E A U T I F U L !

Luminous silence...
Only color fills the space
Between night and day.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-10-11 02:29 PM

outstanding!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-10-11 04:36 PM

~Winds of chance blowing
Words around these pages blue
Encircles ... me ... you~

~*~

~Senryu almost
Same as intriguing Haiku
Ink-of-think in spill~

~*~

~Tanka comes along
As delicate as can be
Words-in-trace of thoughts
Penned so melodiously
Singing rhymes on page~

***What a fun, fun PiP day !***

John~
I adore your windy Haiku~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2006-10-11 04:59 PM

Great haikus! It's been a while since I've written any of these...I think I feel some inspiration coming on. thank you.

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

Posts 557
CA United States

6 posted 2006-10-11 05:13 PM

Hi, Everyone!

Such lovely Haikus in response! Thanks for all of the wonderful comments, oh, Everyone! xoxoxo

John

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2006-10-11 06:44 PM

Well done.

haiku dressed in blue
silent waits ressurection -
till lips whisper life

CG

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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8 posted 2006-10-12 12:45 PM

Bravo, CastleGuard!

I couldn't have said it better myself...

John

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-10-12 06:16 PM

delightful John
I'm feeling inspired too...

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

10 posted 2006-10-13 12:17 PM

Lovely, Just lovely. Please keep it up!

INclan

JLHunter
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11 posted 2006-10-13 04:06 AM

Hi, TL.

I'm glad that I could help in any small way!

John xo

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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12 posted 2006-10-13 04:09 AM

Hi, INclan.

I shall endeavor to fulfill my charge! lol

In any case, thanks for the encouragement!

John

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

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