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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-10 11:20 PM



This Poem is special for me.
It tells about a girl i met 2 years ago.
we became friends, and maybe even more.
This goes for her.

Cruel Angel (For May, the girl that changed)

You
cruel angel
so kind yet so evil
so sweet yet so bitter

although i knew how you really were
i still approached to you
i still had hope on you
and your lost smile

i smiled at you
yet you always looked
the other way
i always told you
nice things
yet you always answered
with the same sad words

you
cruel angel
when i talked to you
about your life, your feelings
you left leaving me with doubts

you
cruel angel
i just can't hate you
because although you hurt me
you also give me peace

you
cruel angel
i hope you will change someday
i hope you will come to me someday
and smile like y taught you many times over

because you are warm yet so cold
so funny yet so sad

you are my friend
but also my enemy

i know one day
you will come back to me
and smile
for the first time in many years
and then you will see
that you are the most sweet angel in heaven.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2006-10-10 11:26 PM


well it sounds like someone you really don't need in your life...I like stable people myself...makes for even ground and I don't like roller coasters
DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2006-10-10 11:29 PM


i understand what you say, but i.., there is something i feel about her..something that attracts me..
maybe i like complicated relationships!..heh..

denis.

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