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Refugee
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since 2006-08-04
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0 posted 2006-10-10 01:02 PM


Over and over
Your face in my head
Keeps me spinning round
Trying to hold on steady
To keep from falling down

Lost you once were,
Thought your soul was gone
Tossed into an endless ocean
Never allowing time for
The slow crush of emotion

I suppress the urge
The most basic desire
To express what I feel
So with furtive glances
These moments I steal

Watching you flower
With tender care
Like a bloom in spring
From a seed laid dormant
Is such a wonderful thing

Love comes to heal,
To strengthen you
And to purify
I watch as you grow wings
And soar into the sky


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-10-10 01:27 PM



That kind of love
is never taken
for granted.

Very well done, Poet.


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2006-10-10 01:28 PM


Very pretty poetry, with a dash of angst.


DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2006-10-10 09:13 PM


I just loved it...
its pretty, and the idea is just not difficult to see!..
excellent!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-10-10 11:13 PM


beautiful!
The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-10-10 11:13 PM



it's just lovely
Refugee...

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2006-10-11 07:51 AM


So very sweet, the sentiment here.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-10-11 07:53 AM


lovely work, refugee.  
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2006-10-11 09:45 AM


Friend Refugee, this one is gold
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