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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-10 04:15 AM



Pearlridge


Although I'm walking
in the mall, I feel
so all alone.

Perhaps before
this night
is over

I'll miss
every woman
I've ever
known.


JamesLee
07October
2006
Walking in the
Pearlridge Mall.



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jody5
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1 posted 2006-10-10 04:37 AM


This was very deep.  It hit me right where my heart is.  I am at a loss for words.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-10-10 07:05 AM



Reflections are but mirrors
turned inside...




The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-10 11:36 PM



it aches James...


passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-10-10 11:45 PM


the mall is a bad place to be alone James

get outta there!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2006-10-11 08:15 PM


Thank you Jody, Sunshine, Lady and passing shadows for the nice responses...
Most of the time I feel happy in the mall...it was like a ninja attack that particular occasion...and shortly thereafter the thoughts were gone...James

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