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sewasham
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0 posted 2006-10-09 09:46 PM


Why The Willow Weeps

Come listen my darling if you'd like to know
The very sad tale of a tree long ago
And what has become of that tree still today
For letting its vanity get in the way

Down by the river that flows deep and blue
A beautiful plant called the Willow tree grew
Beside the cool waters each bright sunny day
With the other fruit trees it would gather to play

Of all of the trees bearing fruit fresh and pure
The Willow thought it had the greatest for sure
The fruit of the Willow was tasty you see
Juicy and plump it was sweet as could be

The Willow said “My fruit is surely the best”
“It’s clearly much better than all of the rest”
It soon was filled up with such a smug spirit
Other fruit trees couldn’t stand to be near it

They told all the fairies who lived in the wood
And asked them for help with this mess if they could
The fairies then spoke to the smug Willow trees
And asked them politely if they’d stop it please

The Willows just laughed at the fairies request
Saying “You are all jealous ‘cause we are the best”
Now everyone knows fairy magic is feared
The Willow trees fruit very soon disappeared

And never again has the Willow trees root
Been able to grow even one piece of fruit
So there by the river its secret it keeps
And that, dearest child’s, why the Willow tree weeps



© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 2006-10-09 10:07 PM



oh Steve
this is delightful!

JLHunter
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2 posted 2006-10-10 01:31 AM


Hi, Steve, is it?

I was quite entertained, and not a little bit surprised to learn that willows once bore fruit!

Great write!

John

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

aziza
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3 posted 2006-10-10 01:36 AM


Very lovely
And I believe in fairies
and the history of the fruited Willows.

a

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4 posted 2006-10-10 04:17 AM


The Weeping Willows have serenaded you
for this masterful
tribute.

I wondered why they were swaying so.
A delight to read. xx

jody5
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5 posted 2006-10-10 04:33 AM


Wonderful write, Much enjoyed.

Hugs Kimberly


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6 posted 2006-10-10 07:44 AM



Something for all ages...

well done, Steve!

Thank you!


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7 posted 2007-10-11 01:51 PM





*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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