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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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~ to Juana la Loca dear lady now I remember this madness to wake on a sunshine morning kiss the other half of your heart find he has slipped away to plead for breath where there is none begs the question what now? cry? there is no feel for that si beg déme… give me dos momentos… two moments nada mas… nothing more two moments more of his breath suplicar déme but to whom shall we plead? ahhh dear lady ahora now I remember this madness Juana la Loca… Joanna the Mad, was the daughter of Isabel and Ferdinand. She became deranged when her husband, King Phillip the Handsome, died in 1506. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..are you sure? I think she works at chuey's on the avenue here in ventura now...she is so sexy when she is crazy'd up. enjoyed this piece ms, your tender side is lovely |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How easy it is to remember the madness... this slipped over me like a silk memory... thank you, Kate. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
give me two moments nothing more. This side of your pen is so lovely Kate, breathtaking writing here. Hugs. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady "to wake on a sunshine morning kiss the other half of your heart find he has slipped away" You create poignant here in this poem...tenderly written. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger you mean that blond cashier at chuey’s? it’s not her you just like blonds when they’re crazy'd up thank you rascal… and sometimes difficult to forget thank you Karilea I appreciate you… gentle Donna my friend thank you… hugs to you thank you so much for your kind words Martie… [This message has been edited by The Lady (10-09-2006 04:57 PM).] |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
You words and style are always so well done. Lovely. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Steve |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TL. That was heartbreaking and lovely. Very good, indeed. Also, I very much liked the form--it went wonderfully with the flow. Yours is an artistic molding of "form follows function." John Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much JL Kate |
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