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Dear Lady/San Marco

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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 10-08-2006 10:07 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dominique-Simone


Dear Lady,

Yesterday
when the sun glared down
I stood within the square
centered
colors unnatural
gleamed off gold buildings
while church bells sang to soothe the crazed
arms outstretched I hummed
while pigeons conversed  
we sat together and spoke of you
and they flew in perfect sequence
I dream tonight of San Marco
and your dainty hands
holding kernels
you were young
wild
unaware of the memories
that would carve deep into the cobblestone
while with frightened ease, you too
laughed with the pigeons
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Sunshine
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1 posted 10-08-2006 10:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Ah...

And the poems bloom
under the kiss
of poetry.

Well done, Dominique!

Dominique-Simone
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thanks, Sunhine..
The Lady
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"we sat together and spoke of you
and they flew in perfect sequence
I dream tonight of San Marco
and your dainty hands
holding kernels
you were young
wild"

Page
this sings so well
we should all feed the pigeons
for the first time
when we are young
I was a little envious
but I love the picture of you
with that goofy Venetian bird

one of your best Monklet!

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 10-09-2006 03:28 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Page, this is outstanding. Lovely writing!!
Dominique-Simone
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5 posted 10-09-2006 04:57 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

Thank you both for your words of inspiration.
amberhues
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6 posted 11-01-2006 06:54 PM       View Profile for amberhues   Email amberhues   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amberhues

WOW! I loved this.  
Dominique-Simone
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7 posted 11-02-2006 08:47 AM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

Thanks, this poem is very speacial to me.
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Deep in the heart


8 posted 11-02-2006 09:21 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Beautiful work!
I loved it.
More, please

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 11-02-2006 09:41 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Your words spoke directly to my spirit! A glorious write! ~ Filled with vivid images and stirring sentiments!

Grace-full penning!

Loving Light,

Earth Angel
Dominique-Simone
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10 posted 11-02-2006 10:50 AM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

Thank you both... I am thrilled you enjoyed it so much!
Dark Stranger
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ms Dom, a pleasure to watch you dance
Dominique-Simone
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Thank you kindly Dark, glad to perform!
MoonShadow
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13 posted 05-29-2007 07:49 AM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow


   Beautiful imagery with such a graceful flow. Thank you for sharing the vision.

           MoonShadow
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