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ozlem
Junior Member
since 2006-10-06
Posts 16


0 posted 2006-10-08 04:15 PM


I don't want to be loved anymore
Such a pain, makes it worse, nothing more
I don't want to be the one you adore
Hope time will restore

[This message has been edited by ozlem (10-08-2006 07:06 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-10-08 04:39 PM


Each time you write, another vision.
Sometimes the pain is so great, that subconsciously we push away the very comfort
we have sought all along.
Or, taken another way...
Wait for the healing.

Lots of room for interpretations in your works.  Well done.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-08 04:57 PM



I agree with TD
give it time

nice job...

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