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I Feel You
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I Feel You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I Feel You the wind has whispered you a thousand times above the barriers of space through branches it swiftly slips as some invisible liquid seeping across miles crawling over rock etching a timeless name it does not flow around me it travels through me to the edges of me completely and in its whispers I feel you I feel you “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
A wonderful and touching poem, Helen. I enjoyed it immensely. I'm glad to see you are not "cynical and drunk and boring someone in some dark cafe"  "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
Take me away |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and in its whispers I feel you I feel you" this whispers to me too Helen haunting... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such tender sentiment. Lovely thoughts Helen. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The wind, like an invisible liquid...now, I really like that anaology...the poem's lovely, H.....*hugs*......jo |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Helen, this was soft as a breeze from beginning to tender end. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ This is as lovely a penning as I've ever read from the ink of your pen~ A keeper of thought, for sure~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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