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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-10-08 01:20 PM



Because, Because, Because, Because, Because

~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~
~Because
I think of you
as a friend of measure
I count you among the treasures
of gifts stored in a corner of my heart
That you care for me is a gift,
wrapped in loving friendship,
ever turning
Because~
our friendship bears
the fruit of nurtured care
tended daily with the sharing
of caring thoughts that keeps our friendship strong
I raise my voice in praising thanks
we have one another
that's great by me
Because~
I need your love
as a testament to
who I am, and hope yet to be
firmly anchored to the friendships in store
knowing that just in the giving
I get back so much more
to give away
Because~
in its' return
it brings new sun shining
brighter, lighter, than e're before
warming the hearth of my heart and my home
with truest friendships of adore
golden treasures gleaming
richness is found
Because~
knowing of you
is finding a treasure
that, when unearthed, glows Heavenly
Keeping the foreverly of you close
enough to reach and touch each day
within my heart to grow
You are friend, just
Because~

~If you happen to see yourself
in these little strung-together Rictameter beads
... wear them well~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-10-08 01:33 PM


And you are loved by so many "Because" of all those 'becauses'.

Your loving spirit radiates so much needed warmth and goodness into this world.

Loving Light,
EO


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2 posted 2006-10-08 02:01 PM


Marge that is so lovely and it is how I feel about you and songbird.  


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3 posted 2006-10-08 03:22 PM


I think a lot of us would fit in perfectly
with at least one of the becauses...if not
more.

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4 posted 2006-10-08 03:52 PM


You are the Queen of Rictameter, Marge.  Very nice string of pearls......jo
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5 posted 2006-10-08 04:49 PM



simply delightful Marge...

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6 posted 2006-10-08 08:06 PM


Dear Marge:  You have so many friends and admirers, I'm sure they all can find themselves in this poem somewhere! Such a special write!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2006-10-08 09:23 PM


Marge, I remember when we first connected, some seven years ago.  I believe I wrote something with an Indian or nature in it...

and there you were.

Remember?




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8 posted 2006-10-08 11:26 PM


Beautiful.

A touching poem that has left me at quite a loss for words.

~Kira

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9 posted 2006-10-08 11:39 PM


they look very pretty on me

thanks Marge

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10 posted 2006-10-08 11:43 PM


If ever there were one that reaped what she did sow, it would be you. Like poetry, you have beauty and grace. Like poetry, you carry others along in a rhythm of peace. Like poetry, you sustain, entertain, inspire, and uplift.

In fact, dear Marge, you are the personification of poetry. And it is better because of you. Just like so many of us here, myself included, are better souls since meeting you and your gift.

Your poem is beautiful, but does not come close to the beauty you possess.

From my heart, to yours,
Sandra

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11 posted 2006-10-09 02:57 AM


maybe because your so special you have such a life long friend. I am sorry that my once thought true friends have gone. I can count on one hand who I Now have. Live and learn
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12 posted 2006-10-09 08:39 AM


Hi, Marge.

That is indeed a very beautiful poem.  I don't usually wear pearls, but these I will try on!  Oh!  Look how lovely!  Yes, I'll take a set--maybe two.

John xo

PS: This poem reminds me of a song, or perhaps as a counterpoint to the song byt Al Martino: Cuando, Cuando, Cuando?

Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight?
Brain: The same thing we do every night, Pinky: try to take over the world!

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13 posted 2006-10-09 08:49 AM


Marge this is beautiful & speaks to the many friends you have. I just love it.
Love,
Betty

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14 posted 2006-10-09 12:22 PM


Marge, this is beautiful....friendship is a precious gift BECAUSE of all these reasons!

sky

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15 posted 2006-10-09 01:52 PM


Marge/sis...I thought I'd replied to this...I am now with this:  
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16 posted 2006-10-09 02:35 PM


Marge,
It has taken me awhile to formulate my response to this posting.  My response is two fold.  First, I revere Abe Lincoln for his eloquence.  I find in this posting an eloquence seldom seen.  Second, though I speak with the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I am as worthless as white noise.  Here I find pitch and tone of clearest quality.  My simple, an only possible, summation:  THANK YOU

INclan

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2006-10-10 06:43 PM



You all are so kind to this poetess~

I am merely a reflection of the love that I receive from the ALL OF YOU~

Sandra~
I *sigh* with deepest appreciation for your comments~

InClan~
Sending a special *HUGLET*
for the beauty of your reply~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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18 posted 2006-10-11 12:27 PM


Dear Marge,
This is really beautiful! Those who know you, love you "Just Because", just as you love and care for us "Because".

What an amazing woman you are!
Love and hugs,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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19 posted 2006-10-11 12:37 PM


Sending my love out to you...just Because!
I'm wearing these beautiful beads in my hair.
Hugs coming your way, Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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20 posted 2006-10-12 04:48 PM


I had to herd my thoughts back on track... reading the title had me humming "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz" *G*

This is absolutely lovely, Marge... a beautiful reflection of the poet who penned it. *S*

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21 posted 2006-10-12 05:52 PM


good read
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