Once Upon A Time At Your Death

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JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2006-10-08 11:15 AM

Once upon a time in your life you believed
It would never change
Every part of it fit like a glove
Impossible to rearrange

Smiling and laughing without a worry
Enjoying your role in life's game
As time quickly passed, not once did you blink
Everything remained the same

But then came the day you found yourself on
The sidelines wanting back in
You could not conceive how you were removed
From the game you were certain to win

And time after time you tried very hard
To force your way back on the field
But with each attempt, you constantly failed
And persistence soon became yield

Once upon a time at your death
The clock ticked away as you sat in unrest
Angry and anxious while watching the game
You turned on your life in protest

To realize what was up was now down
You turned to the bottle and sank
And as you plunged into deep misery
You found solace in all that you drank

Until one day when those demons attacked
And your mind was captured for good
The solution you found was to finish your life
And in this, you knew that you would

You began to think about loved ones you’d hurt
Yet you knew what had to be done
You climbed to the top of the stadium’s stairs
And flew straight into the sun

And as you slipped into unconsciousness
You thought about what you did know
That they would believe this death was your end
But your ending was long time ago

Once upon a time at your death
Life threw in its own monkey wrench
Broken and beaten, and out of the game
You could not remain on the bench

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

1 posted 2006-10-09 03:43 PM

Saving this one. It has a Bite to it.
Well done !!!!

Kalandria
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 44
Yorkshire, England

2 posted 2006-10-09 04:01 PM

Bravo...an excellent poem of wistful regrets. 'Once upon a time at your death'..a wonderful line. Thankyou.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2006-10-09 07:36 PM

This is simply stunning.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

4 posted 2006-10-11 06:42 PM

Thank you all for the kind replies.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-10-18 09:37 PM

sad stuff

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