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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-08 01:23 AM



Well..i'm a bit sleepy..
Thanks to all those who read my poems and for their advices.

Here we go.


whenever i take a walk
i start reciting to the silence
and poems start appearing
i recite them into the emptiness
until i arrive home to write it

but one night
i was walking
and i was reciting
such a nice poem
and when i arrived home
i just could not write it
the silence had stolen it
i walked those streets many times already
trying to hear the melody
trying to hear the lyric
but i couldn't recover it

you stranger
if you ever meet the silence
if you ever meet the emptiness
tell them
to give me my poem back
tell them
to send me at least the melody
or some proof that i have
at least finished it
cause i no longer remember
tell them
that i need to recite it
cause i think
it's about
the love i lost

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1 posted 2006-10-08 08:02 AM


Denis~

'the silence had stolen it'

Ah, you have set loose a poem thought to waft its way into someone else's ink~
Happens to all of us ... and sometimes it circles and returns home to us ... sometimes not~

A lovely and thoughtful penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2006-10-10 10:40 AM


i agree with your words, and i thank you for reading.
i'm glad you liked it, after all i'm just beginning.

Denis.

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