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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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She she is sometimes so full of another color like a season she searches true the minutes capturing them as they slip sand and wash into the wealth of the moon and more become listen to the crashing of her high tide like forest at night in creep up with the leaves waiting for the dew all crawl and rustle she hears one grain of sand shift soft relief she is wealth of moon and more a ramble a tree stands with her in the tall of stretch and scurry things twig her toe in walk along and jam her sway along the way of best light is such verve and frequently captured by the chain that pulls her to design the falling of the magic fills the chasm and brings her to a fast focus align listen can you hear the seasons changing across her skin she feels it with her warm and waits beneath the waning light of autumn for a storm to nudge her dormant ions ----- from time and change |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie, such a beautifully reverent poem this is.  ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So very ... "capturing", Martie. I especially liked this: "the falling of the magic fills the chasm and brings her to a fast focus align" but it's all lovely.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MissySis~ 'listen to the crashing of her high tide like forest at night in creep up with the leaves waiting for the dew all crawl and rustle she hears one grain of sand shift soft relief she is wealth of moon and more a ramble a tree stands with her in the tall of stretch and scurry things twig her toe in walk along and jam her sway along the way of best' Okay .... such a magic Martiesque Moment~ I *sigh* at the sheer beauty of your thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a poem to wake up to, and to listen to... I would suggest any reader, read this one aloud, and feel the touch of each syllable. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellente, dear one... muy bueno.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just superb - that is all - well maybe outstanding - maybe terrific - well all the superlatives Martie - you resemble them all - Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spellbound. What an amazing image you brought to life here. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I agree with Sunshine your words are full and lush in the mouth a rich work Martie... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
listen to the crashing of her high tide like forest at night in creep up with the leaves waiting for the dew all crawl and rustle she hears one grain of sand shift soft relief Martie, when I read you, I hear so much...and I FEEL so much.... tis a beautiful thing dear....as is this write. HUGS YOU |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful as usual Martie, simply a glorious look at the season. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, I can hear those things, see those things....but almost never except when you show them to me in the spirit braille of your words....then can detect, like reading with fingertips, what I can't detect on my own. I've visited this poem at least a half-dozen times, since you posted it...and each time I've blessed you for sharing it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, And so the seasons pass in ways we would not notice without the insight of our resident master wordsmith. I too have read this several times and am enamored by that which I am unable to do myself. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a vision that sings yes, that's what this is |
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