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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-10-07 09:56 AM



"Collect a wage." you say
So I reply, as is my way,
"Where is the finery
in salary or pepper?"

And now I am feeling clever
So give me a new endeavor
One new delusion to devour
an ideal to tar and feather
Hand me a new thing to paint black
to deliver back with pun attached.

All right.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

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JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21
Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa
1 posted 2006-10-08 06:06 PM


~ I liked this one a lot too. Interesting and I understand the pun sequence, at least, I think so.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2006-10-08 11:38 PM


You make people think! (Had to read it a couple times to catch on...heh heh)

As usual though you're always popping up with something new and it always has a way of hitting home!

Hugs and Hershey bars!

~Kira

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