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Triskaidekaphobia
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In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-10-07 03:06 AM



Oh, what utter joy it is to find
on emergence from fitful rest
with the waking of the mind
a dead sparrow on my chest

To see a cat with grin so smug
with eyes that say on his behalf
"There you are! Let's have a hug"
for he does not see it as a gaffe

The bloody cat looks so dismayed
when wings in plastic I enshroud
I half feel I should eat it anyway
he looks so very pleased and proud

I cannot shout at him aloud
and besides he just
....meowed....


"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South


[This message has been edited by Triskaidekaphobia (10-08-2006 04:28 PM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-10-07 07:40 AM


OMG, this is so funny!!!

Thank you for this laugh today LT...you have more than cheered me up

Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-10-07 08:44 AM



Poor kitty, and after he worked SO hard!



Smiling at this!


Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
3 posted 2006-10-07 09:19 AM


Can't...stop...laughing!!!

Really great job! I needed a good laugh!
(Sounds like something my cat would do if I ever let him in the house!)

Thanx so much for sharing!

~Kira

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2006-10-07 10:11 AM


LOL....very well written.....could see the cat looking into my eyes....(course I would'
ve bounced him off the wall) . . . enjoyed much...j.

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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5 posted 2006-10-07 12:26 PM


This is just purrr-fect!!!

Sandra

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2006-10-07 02:01 PM


for he does not see at as a gaffe
  did you mean "it" as a gaffe?

Your poetry is sparking memories this day... my cat would  bring me the remains, but only the brains were ever left..I wonder  what that implied???


M

Triskaidekaphobia
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7 posted 2006-10-08 12:15 PM


Nakedthoughts I did indeed mean "it"... I avoid spell checkers and the like, as I do the plague, the things seem to hate me.

And to the rest of you; many thanks for your replies (I'm glad I managed to cheer you up passing shadows! I'm pleased I could return the favour) .

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

iliana
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8 posted 2006-10-08 04:21 PM


Too cute!  
The Lady
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9 posted 2006-10-08 04:23 PM




LOL

you've made my day!


suthern
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10 posted 2006-10-12 04:29 PM


Oh, I do love this!!! Thanks for the grins! *S*
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