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The Rush Of Revealing
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The Rush Of Revealing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The Rush Of Revealing Intricate, the need of the self for contentedness As a delta, the soul collects vital happiness Most of me in alluvial flows come to rest Though I have no doubt about my own conclusions That must pry me from love in reversed revolutions Passion fills my eyes as my heart the same Hoping for the miracle that could soothe torrent rain Bring me strength to let go, as a true love abides Instead, I am carried as sand in the tides Night and day washed away as my dreams Not the tragedy it probably seems, as a delta is still Diamonds shine in the depths of undauntedly will Copyright Kkh 10/06/06 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Hoping for the miracle that could soothe torrent rain Bring me strength to let go, as a true love abides" this is what I prayed and I was answered  excellent write TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "Diamonds shine in the depths of undauntedly will" yes you do!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such an awesome treasure you have cultivated and given us...that we might learn and grow as poets...just as you have. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You never cease to amaze me, TD! Your words so easily penetrate me with mood. Wonderfully expressed! miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful "As a delta, the soul collects vital happiness" yes TD... |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Your poems always make me think. Which is good, gives an old brain a workout. That, plus the seemingly unending well of imagery and metaphor. Nice to read you. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
You have revealed the motherlode of truth in this very fine write. Since I consider myself a seeker of truth in all I do, say or think, when I stumble upon it, it is a revelation to me. It is said that "The Truth Will Set You Free." That freedom is now what I yearn for, even more than the futile search for love which remains so out of reach to me. Thank you so much for sharing, it means everything to me. To thy own self be true |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Hoping for the miracle that could soothe torrent rain Bring me strength to let go, as a true love abides Instead, I am carried as sand in the tides" Wow!! Nice write. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely stunning....your words reach into the soul and leave your reader in awe....Amazing....**BIG HUGS** MERRY CHRISTMAS |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
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