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Kalandria
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since 2006-05-23
Posts 44
Yorkshire, England

0 posted 2006-10-06 03:32 PM





I sit beside the silvered loch,
Give my words to the wind,
In the hope that they find their way to you.
Carried by the breeze across ocean miles
To lay a kiss upon your sleeping lips.

The mist conjours fleeting ghosts
That dance through highland glens,
Bruised purple by their heather shroud.
I dance there too, with thoughts of you
And what I've left behind.

The eagle soars to the call
of the solitary piper as he stands,
Upon the field of a battle long passed.
His mournful notes touch the fragile heart
I gave, in time, to you.

I drink from the mountain stream,
As it tumbles from snow capped hills.
Watch as the white horses play in the foam.
And awaken childish images of knights I sought,
But never thought I'd find.

The day fades and I pass with it.,
I exist now in your dreams,where I wait
To lace your fingers through my own.
And speak words I promised to the wind,
My love, I''m coming home.


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Triskaidekaphobia
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
1 posted 2006-10-06 03:55 PM


Well, I am going to have to demand you be a little less talented. You're showing me up! lol

Another excellent poem. I really like to the flow of this one.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-10-06 05:56 PM


NIce...James
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