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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2006-10-06 02:51 PM



Your easy on the eyes
and oh, that way

that way that they smile
topped off with a heart of gold
wrapped up in
a killer combo,
that blows in with wind

a package so  complete
but baby, please;

don't be too good to me
because your the kind I fall for
with ease

and I'm afraid
of falling fast
because I know
that sometimes breezes
aren't meant to last.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-10-06 04:47 PM


Donna, I like the analogy in this one.  Good luck, lady!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-10-06 06:17 PM


Wonderful...James
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