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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-10-06 12:18 PM


Andalusia

Its Andalusia starts my day
A place from which I cannot stray
Heaven and hell with space between
But not a crutch that I can lean

It picks me up in winds turmoil
And spices me with seasons toil
Stirs me with the dust of grime
To let me sip a taste of time

And with this sip I turn in vain
To feel the sense of love and pain
Of laugh and cry but mostly sigh
And then illusion that I die

I hear the echoes of the plum
The echoes beat a violent drum
And I am caught within the white
That holds the colors of the light

I fight and scream, wiggle and squirm
But Andalusia holds me firm


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seraphin
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1 posted 2006-10-06 12:20 PM


Vibrant. Captivating. A joy to read.

Sandra

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2 posted 2006-10-06 03:09 PM


Good afternoon, Mr. T.!

"I fight and scream, wiggle and squirm
But Andalusia holds me firm"

~ I thought her name was Isabel. lol

May Andalusia start your every day with the glorious shine of Heaven's White Light.

Angel love, hugs, 'n kisses,
EA

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3 posted 2006-10-06 03:56 PM


Ole'
Escritura excelente

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-10-06 03:59 PM


seraphin
A delightful comment, thank you.

Earth Angel
Andalusia is the name of my space.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-10-06 04:02 PM


Sharon,
Flattery will get you everywhere.

scorpio
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6 posted 2006-10-06 04:54 PM


Well done Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-10-06 05:21 PM


scorpio
Thank you my friend.

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-10-06 07:23 PM



Andalusia
Isabel...
you sound happy
to me...
love your spirit
Sir Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-10-06 08:59 PM


Lady,
Thank you my Lady.

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