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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-10-06 07:21 AM


little boy eyes in old man windows
the northbound sways her heavy hips
clickity chips under foot
of high heal rails

ocean afternoon is old blanket
soggy salt with seagulls sewn in
between the bots dots yachts
rubbing their itch on wave thumbs

and a cranky god looks down
with allergies from the prosperity
that decorates his fresh baked sky
in observation of observation

perhaps a thought of value this time
as the redwoods pose as adams
and eve in evening along the avenue
and the blink of the eye ansels

are little boy eyes in old man windows
_______________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-06-2006 09:28 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-10-06 08:55 AM



Tucking this one
into the library
that gathers no dust...



Thank you for bringing "it" home again.


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-10-06 09:14 AM


Dark~

'little boy eyes in old man windows'

Priceless !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-10-06 09:28 AM


ms sunone, thanks for the tuck.

___________

ms marge, thanks to you lady

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-10-06 09:33 AM


Perhaps a thought of value......this from you, all wrapped up in poetic perfection as only you can do D......The way that your eyes see, is such a gift to the world.  
seraphin
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5 posted 2006-10-06 10:12 AM


thank you,for a respite.
done well

Sandra

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6 posted 2006-10-06 10:27 AM


That is such a great line and idea.
Little boy's eyes in old man's windows.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-10-06 12:09 PM


ms gs, thanks to you

___________

ms sandra, thank you for the touch

___________

refugee friend, thanks so much for looking in

Martie
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8 posted 2006-10-06 12:10 PM


DS

I love it when you write like this!!  

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-10-06 12:17 PM


ms martie, thanks little neighbor
am pleased to please you

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-10-06 05:26 PM



“and the blink of the eye ansel”

this line has caught me up
it’s incredible…
love the whole thing

baby take a bow

Moonkist
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11 posted 2006-10-07 08:01 AM


...such a sad piece, Daark Stranger...
...innocence versus aging...
...it's best to stay young...
no matter how old you are...
that's the way to stay alive!
...thanks for sharing the morning dew...
~Moonkist

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