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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-10-05 07:28 PM


Look into my eyes and tell me what it is you see,
A fallen angel or risen demon in me?
Take a deep breath and pause,
You're troubled by the cause.
Circumstances of a world so cold,
It's the unwritten story being told.
Look into my eyes and tell me what it is you see,
A fallen angel or risen demon in me?
Friend or foe,
It matters not just go!
Look into my eyes and tell me what it is you see,
A fallen angel or risen demon in me?
Drunken little people work away at me,
Patient mental stares full of glee.
Passive speared ritual screams,
Nanofied thoughts and dreams.
Look into my eyes and tell me what it is you see,
A fallen angel or risen demon in me?
Drunken little people work away at me,
Can you look inside and get a glimpse of my plea?
You're stares are SCREAMING back,
Could you saw it and hack?
NOW look into my eyes tell me directly what you see,
A fallen angel or risen demon in..ME!!

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-10-05 07:59 PM


Hmmm, Hot Flakes, perhaps a bit of each?!?


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-10-05 11:10 PM


most times it's hard to tell

but I tend to agree with Linda

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