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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-10-05 05:51 PM



We fell back into place, you and I
to sit before a mirrored life
behind us, we saw our doorways;
before us, we still saw surprise;

curious, we entered the mind of our eyes.

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-10-05 06:07 PM


Sissie

Always curious....it opens doors and sometimes even pushes...of course it's the path to what we will become.  Loved this mirrored view!!  

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2 posted 2006-10-05 06:10 PM


A wise woman, you are.... and I do love the
newest picture that you have posted for our
viewing pleasure....

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-10-05 06:35 PM


The minds eye, is often a most pleasurable sight lady.  Enjoyed your muse here today. Hugs.
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4 posted 2006-10-06 07:40 AM




KEEPER!

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-10-06 09:08 AM


The quality of the poetry on this site, gives me goosebumps! This morning, I have wanted to save every single poem that I have read! ~ Yours being one of them!

BTW, you glow in your new photo, Dear One With Sun!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2006-10-06 10:28 AM


The mind of our eyes, where true beauty lies...

Beautifully said Sunshine.

seraphin
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7 posted 2006-10-06 12:28 PM


A stunning work.

Sandra

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8 posted 2006-10-06 02:26 PM



Excellent. The brevity only reinforces the vision.

CG

iliana
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9 posted 2006-10-06 04:57 PM


Ooooh, I like this, SIL, very much.  It leaves me with wonder.   ...jo
Kristabell
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10 posted 2006-10-06 05:21 PM


I liked this. You said so much in so few words.

Kristabell

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11 posted 2006-10-06 07:38 PM



stopped me in my tracks
it did
I wanted to know
what you saw
in the mind of your eyes...

lovely Karilea


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