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Open Poetry #39

snaked thoughts

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-10-05 11:02 AM

Snaking their way into the city,
the pilgrims wait to view death
to guarantee everlasting life.
What irony!

Back up three paces
and think....

a surrealistic scene April 2005,
millions heading to St Peter’s Square
to say goodbye to Pope John Paul,
even as thousands of women
fight their way each day
to family planning clinics

I shake my head at these lines
of life and death
coiled within
the slither of a snake.

ChePacifica
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 58
Ignore Alien Orders

1 posted 2006-10-05 12:13 PM

a thought provoking wise pen you wield poet

very nice work

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-10-05 12:26 PM

Midnitesun
A remarkable write.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2006-10-05 12:35 PM

What irony indeed Kacy.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-10-05 02:25 PM

I love the way
you cause thinking to happen
Kacy...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-10-05 02:26 PM

thank you each, for reading this one

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-10-06 07:45 AM

thought-provoking write Kacy

makes me shake my head too

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