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Being Simple... |
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blue_soul17 New Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 3Philippines |
Being Simple… The scent of the ambience seems to be perfect, But why do I still feel so blue? No one appreciates my soul I thought I will be strong someday but somehow I became weaker I travel all alone to find the true happiness Even my heart is weary and hopeless Nobody hears me cry My spirit does not know where the right path I can’t see the light from above… God did not ignore me He gave me a simple candle to give me courage to fight all the tearful goodbyes It’s like a life line; it fixes my broken heart and takes good care of it Now, there’s a soul starting a new hopeful memoir… It’s not simple but rather a special candle Maybe, he’s not aware how he touches my life He’s an ordinary man to others but not for me And finally, he knows that he is my special candle… Thanks for every words you say to me and for the time you’ve given me! I want to ask you this: “Can you promise me to stay forever by my side and be my refuge?” |
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ChePacifica Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 58Ignore Alien Orders |
a Candle indead - as are your words poets much enjoyed - vg job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And finally, he knows that he is my special candle…" well done Rachel |
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