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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you could be trouble in glasses but you take them off and tell me you can't see anything that far ahead perhaps what is coming is a turn on to you or you like being in the dark just before the lightning strikes yes there are bruises on my back from occasional doorway greetings casual in nature from the kneeling of strangers that whispered moments in lieu of saved up heart beats in water bottles without labels from another man's refrigeration sight-un-seen of course, but then there is always my thirst for tomorrow _____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-05-2006 09:42 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
tomorrow is a waterfall waiting to quench your thirst. lovely...... |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Seems there should be a continuation. Another gem in your trove Dark. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Damn, you did it again. And I am glad you did! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
”there is always my thirst for tomorrow” yes Stranger and it seems unquenchable… I like this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks hon __________ Refugee friend, humble thanks to you _____________ ms az, you bless me with the smile, thanks __________ ladyone, you make me thirsty with your smile, thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Hi! Was that Arrowhead?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, just a little one, wonder who shot it..(grin) thanks little neighbor |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
casual in nature from the kneeling of strangers that whispered moments in lieu of saved up heart beats in water bottles without labels ~*~ So many niceties to pick from...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend |
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