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Costa de la Luz |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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somos el barco, somos el mar, yo navego en ti, tu navegas en mi we are the boat, we are the sea, I sail in you, you sail in me ~ Lorre Wyatt like children clinging to the hands of sunrise on sleepy cobbles past white walled casas waking blossoms flores cantando singing red and yellow we pick our way barefoot on golden sand where the sea lies morning gray waiting for la luz the light to bring it pearl and silver wet salt fills our mouths covers our feet bodies fit like boats and we fall under to rise and float and sink again infinitamente |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..sand coating tan candylike coating..on glass enjoyed it ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lazy circling fingers writing sandy promises... well done, Lady. Enjoyed very much! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger the candylike coating can be eaten with a belly spoon thank you… sandy promises… beautiful Karilea… thank you thank you for your reply SmartChick… |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I really enjoyed this too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...There is something so sensory in your words...I can feel the sand and more, the vibration from the poet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoohoo!! I love it! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much WindWalker thank you Martie I appreciate you always… thanks for the whoohoo Dixie…  |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Your writes are always so unique and interesting. A pleasure to read. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Steve... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The ocean and it's beauty are one of my favorite topics to read in poetry....thank you for this beauty, a delight to read and I am so glad I didn't miss it. Hugs preciouslady. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
one of my favorites too thank you gentle Donna hugs to you... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
A beautiful scene. Lovely to read on this cold, cold morning. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Sandra I have missed you... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I really like how you combine the gentleness of two languages, as if they blend into one. For a moment, my feet were on the sand. Love your description, The Lady. miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for joining me on the beach misc |
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