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sewasham
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0 posted 2006-10-04 10:51 PM


Garden Of Tears

Here among these garden walls
A sad and lonely teardrop falls
Rolling softly down a cheek
It leaves a painful silver streak

And carries with it all the pain
Of a faded love song’s sad refrain
Across a heart this pain will pass
Like jagged shards of broken glass

But where it falls upon the ground
A bloom of hope will soon be found
The blossoms grow both bright and clear
Each was grown from a single tear

The garden walls are thick and high
To hide the hearts that come to cry
The blooms are plentiful and vast
From all the many tears that passed

Flowers here are all attended
By broken hearts that haven’t mended
But as each bloom falls to the ground
A damaged heart new love has found

For every bloom that leaves this place
Another teardrop streaks a face
There always is a full supply
To take the place of those that die

In my spot the flowers flourish
All of them my tears will nourish
Each day a new fresh bloom appears
In my garden of lonesome tears


© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-04 11:01 PM


this is really sad stuff, but I like

good to see you too...glad you added a pic

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-05 02:14 PM



poignant garden
lovely poem
I like your picture...


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3 posted 2006-10-06 11:54 AM


Poignant, perfect rhyme, and a great subject to  lend tears to.  Enjoyed this very much.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

seraphin
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4 posted 2006-10-06 12:11 PM


I've been to your garden often, and it is indeed as lovely as you describe.

The white roses in the corner, do you see them? Those were from one that was taken too soon from me. And those gardenia's? Those are from one now, that won't take my hand. So nice to see the tears have come to a beautiful end.

You write beautifully.

Sandra

Martie
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5 posted 2006-10-06 12:15 PM


In my garden was a special tree...she died but left a seed watered by me.  Lovely poem!
CastleGuard
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6 posted 2006-10-06 02:31 PM



Poignant and touching. Enjoyed the read.

CG

iliana
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7 posted 2006-10-08 05:57 PM


Terrific poem, Stephen.  Tucking it away.  *hugs*...jo
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2006-10-08 06:15 PM


Enjoyed your poem of the garden.

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